I see the light shining thow the clouds on to the mountain top. I feel amazed of how much work was put in to the mountain. I can smell the fog coming from the mountain.I can feel the fog coming from the mountain in between my fingers. I can taste the air mix with the fog. I can hear the bird from a far and people on the mountain.

work

I did this because my teacher told me to do it for reading and writing. She asked us to do this so that we could understand better describing words for my writing as well as my reading. My picture is about the sparkling water and the seagulls. My favourite bit was the sentence I chose to write about.   

I think to improve Ivan domain we should add trees a glass roof and a comfy bed to sleep in with a LOT OF STUFFED GORILLAS!!!!

Today we made plastic and cheese but this is plastic just after me and Rowan made so it is very soft it will be very hard now .

Ivan is a silverback gorilla. He lived with humans for 4 years. He got
to big to live with them and now. He lives in big top mall and he has
lived there for 24 years of sadness and loneliness.

Ivan is ginormous 400 pound gorilla with smooth, soft black fur and a
majestic silver stripe down his back. He is as tall a human with his
arms up.

Ivan is a lonely gorilla. Ivan likes to throw me-balls, watch funny
cartoons on his TV but his favourite is to draw and paint bananas.

Ivan lives at big top mall in a domain. In his domain their is 3 glass
wall and 1 concrete wall with a jungle painted on it. In Ivan's domain
there's a small pool a baseball a TV and a toy.

I think Ivan should be free

by Jamie

My Metaphors

Jamie is a chocolate tree filled with flavour just about to burst on a candy island.

Jamie is a cruise ship cruising through the warm summer night.

Jamie is a glittering butterfly flying towards the sunset.

Jamie is a piece of paper drifting through the warm summer night sky.