Friday 6 April 2018

My Metaphors

Jamie is a chocolate tree filled with flavour just about to burst on a candy island.

 Jamie is a cruise ship cruising through the warm summer night.

 Jamie is a glittering butterfly flying towards the sunset.

 Jamie is a piece of paper drifting through the warm summer night sky.
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6 comments:

  1. Unknown14 May 2018 at 12:19

    hello jamie its Reuben here. i like your desriptive senticence about what you are. (:

    Reuben
    good bye

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  3. Anonymous17 May 2018 at 12:27

    Hi Jamie I'm Carter from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I like the words you have used in your metaphor writing. My favourite piece was the chocolate tree in your metaphors. I also liked how you welcomed people to your blog with the bubble. Have you ever tried surfing or played Fortnite? Bye Jamie
    From Carter

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  4. Anonymous28 June 2018 at 12:16

    Hi I,m Felix from Wainui Beach School Gisborne I like how you used your favorite stuff that you like to do and not copying anybody else in your class. My favorite part was about how you are a cruise ship going into the warm summer.Have you ever tried surfing or Fortnite if you haven't they really fun to do in your spare time. From Felix

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  6. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 14:28

    Hi Jamie,
    My name is Sione and I attend St Pius x school.I like all your metaphors , they were very funny .


    Best wishes

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